From 0bb7473e1ffd7c75f6ff8a7780c2e183845febb2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrew David Wong <adw@andrewdavidwong.com>
Date: Wed, 1 Nov 2017 22:33:26 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Clean up text (#476)
---
privacy/signal.md | 15 ++++++++-------
1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/privacy/signal.md b/privacy/signal.md
index bf80ba4b..5cc8ce0d 100644
--- a/privacy/signal.md
+++ b/privacy/signal.md
@@ -102,19 +102,20 @@ This can also be used to add a application portable application/script from a ta
6. (optional, only on KDE:) Follow the `Q` menu once more, right-click on the new `Signal: Signal Private Messenger` menu item and select `Add to Panel`.
-Use AppVM based on debian
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+Use an AppVM based on Debian
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**CAUTION:** Before proceeding, please carefully read [On Digital Signatures and Key Verification][qubes-verifying-signatures].
This website cannot guarantee that any PGP key you download from the Internet is authentic.
Always obtain a trusted key fingerprint via other channels, and always check any key you download against your trusted copy of the fingerprint.
-If you don't use chromium, you can install signal with debian :
+If you don't use Chromium, you can install signal with Debian:
-1. (Optional)Create a TemplateVM (debian 8)
+1. (Optional)Create a TemplateVM (Debian 8)
[user@dom0 ~]$ sudo qubes-dom0-update qubes-template-debian-8
-2. Open a terminal in debian 8
+
+2. Open a terminal in Debian 8
[user@dom0 ~]$ qvm-run -a debian-8 gnome-terminal
@@ -123,13 +124,13 @@ If you don't use chromium, you can install signal with debian :
(Optional)[user@debian-8 ~]$ sudo apt-get install curl
[user@debian-8 ~]$ curl -s https://updates.signal.org/desktop/apt/keys.asc | sudo apt-key add -
[user@debian-8 ~]$ echo "deb [arch=amd64] https://updates.signal.org/desktop/apt xenial main" | sudo tee -a /etc/apt/sources.list.d/signal-xenial.list
- [user@debian-8 ~]$ sudo apt uptdate && sudo apt install signal-desktop
+ [user@debian-8 ~]$ sudo apt update && sudo apt install signal-desktop
5. Shutdown the TemplateVM :
[user@dom0 ~]$ qvm-shutdown debian-8
-6. Create a AppVM based on this TemplateVM
+6. Create an AppVM based on this TemplateVM
7. With your mouse select the `Q` menu -> `Domain: "AppVM Name"` -> `"AppVM Name": Add more shortcuts`
Select `Signal` from the left `Available` column, move it to the right `Selected` column by clicking the `>` button and then `OK` to apply the changes and close the window.