From 233b55363a56f2abbb09c52b48c5c1817e715836 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Renatus Date: Sat, 5 Sep 2015 09:55:34 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] nitpicking some typos, wording --- Templates/FedoraMinimal.md | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/Templates/FedoraMinimal.md b/Templates/FedoraMinimal.md index 81415536..b0bb52b6 100644 --- a/Templates/FedoraMinimal.md +++ b/Templates/FedoraMinimal.md @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ It is a good idea to clone the original template, and make any changes in the ne [user@dom0 ~]$ qvm-clone fedora-21-minimal {% endhighlight %} -The sudo package is not installed by default, so lets install it: +The sudo package is not installed by default, so let's install it: {% highlight trac-wiki %} [user@F21-Minimal ~]$ su - @@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ The sudo package is not installed by default, so lets install it: The rsyslog logging service is not installed by default. All logging is now being handled by the systemd journal. Users requiring the rsyslog service should install it manually. -To access the journald log, use the following command: `journalctl` +To access the journald log, use the `journalctl` command. ### as a NetVM -If You want to use this template to for standard NetVMs You should install some more packeges: +If you want to use this template to for standard NetVMs you should install some more packeges: {% highlight trac-wiki %} [user@F21-Minimal ~]$ sudo yum install NetworkManager NetworkManager-wifi network-manager-applet wireless-tools dbus-x11 dejavu-sans-fonts tar tinyproxy @@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ And maybe some more optional but useful packages as well: [user@F21-Minimal ~]$ sudo yum install pciutils vim-minimal less tcpdump telnet psmisc nmap nmap-ncat gnome-keyring {% endhighlight %} -If Your network device needs some firmware then you should also install the corresponding packages as well. The `lspci; yum search firmware` command will help to choose the right one :) +If your network device needs some firmware then you should also install the corresponding packages as well. The `lspci; yum search firmware` command will help to choose the right one :) ### as a ProxyVM -If You want to use this template as a ProxyVM You may want to install evem more packages +If you want to use this template as a ProxyVM you may want to install even more packages #### Firewall @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ This template is ready to use for a standard firewall VM. #### VPN -The needed packages are depend on the VPN technology. `yum search "NetworkManager VPN plugin"` command may help you to choose the right one. +The needed packages depend on the VPN technology. The `yum search "NetworkManager VPN plugin"` command may help you to choose the right one. [More details about setting up a VPN Gateway](/wiki/VPN#ProxyVM)