From f288c694db22d2910694f7c1b43df373bb2f1d77 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthew Flatt <mflatt@racket-lang.org>
Date: Fri, 15 Jul 2011 07:57:42 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] clarification

---
 collects/scribblings/reference/bytes.scrbl   | 4 ++--
 collects/scribblings/reference/fixnums.scrbl | 4 ++--
 collects/scribblings/reference/flonums.scrbl | 4 ++--
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/collects/scribblings/reference/bytes.scrbl b/collects/scribblings/reference/bytes.scrbl
index 4d60963347..8f5376ffa1 100644
--- a/collects/scribblings/reference/bytes.scrbl
+++ b/collects/scribblings/reference/bytes.scrbl
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ string.
 @defproc[(make-shared-bytes [k exact-nonnegative-integer?] [b byte? 0])
 bytes?]{ Returns a new mutable byte string of length @racket[k] where each
 position in the byte string is initialized with the byte @racket[b].
-When @secref["places"] are enabled, the new byte string is allocated in the
+For communication among @tech{places}, the new byte string is allocated in the
 @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 @mz-examples[(make-shared-bytes 5 65)]}
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ When @secref["places"] are enabled, the new byte string is allocated in the
 @defproc[(shared-bytes [b byte?] ...) bytes?]{ Returns a new mutable byte
 string whose length is the number of provided @racket[b]s, and whose
 positions are initialized with the given @racket[b]s.
-When @secref["places"] are enabled, the new byte string is allocated in the
+For communication among @tech{places}, the new byte string is allocated in the
 @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 @mz-examples[(shared-bytes 65 112 112 108 101)]}
diff --git a/collects/scribblings/reference/fixnums.scrbl b/collects/scribblings/reference/fixnums.scrbl
index 30e8bc8873..f72427285c 100644
--- a/collects/scribblings/reference/fixnums.scrbl
+++ b/collects/scribblings/reference/fixnums.scrbl
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ Like @racket[for/vector] or @racket[for*/vector], but for
 @defproc[(shared-fxvector [x fixnum?] ...) fxvector?]{
 
 Creates a @tech{fxvector} containing the given @tech{fixnums}.
-When @tech{places} are enabled, the new @tech{fxvector} is 
+For communication among @tech{places}, the new @tech{fxvector} is 
 allocated in the @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 @mz-examples[#:eval flfx-eval (shared-fxvector 2 3 4 5)]}
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ allocated in the @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 Creates a @tech{fxvector} with @racket[size] elements, where every
 slot in the @tech{fxvector} is filled with @racket[x].
-When @tech{places} are enabled, the new @tech{fxvector} is 
+For communication among @tech{places}, the new @tech{fxvector} is 
 allocated in the @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 @mz-examples[#:eval flfx-eval (make-shared-fxvector 4 3)]}
diff --git a/collects/scribblings/reference/flonums.scrbl b/collects/scribblings/reference/flonums.scrbl
index 5f75bf75b6..20a25a280f 100644
--- a/collects/scribblings/reference/flonums.scrbl
+++ b/collects/scribblings/reference/flonums.scrbl
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ Like @racket[for/vector] or @racket[for*/vector], but for
 @defproc[(shared-flvector [x flonum?] ...) flvector?]{
 
 Creates a @tech{flvector} containing the given inexact real numbers.
-When @tech{places} are enabled, the new @tech{flvector} is 
+For communication among @tech{places}, the new @tech{flvector} is 
 allocated in the @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 @mz-examples[#:eval fl-eval (shared-flvector 2.0 3.0 4.0 5.0)]}
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ allocated in the @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 Creates a @tech{flvector} with @racket[size] elements, where every
 slot in the @tech{flvector} is filled with @racket[x].
-When @tech{places} are enabled, the new @tech{flvector} is 
+For communication among @tech{places}, the new @tech{flvector} is 
 allocated in the @tech{shared memory space}.
 
 @mz-examples[#:eval fl-eval (make-shared-flvector 4 3.0)]}