From 8bd6ed195eb27d61a63619fc4c04dbed362bbd30 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ivan Savov <ivan.savov@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 26 Feb 2012 04:00:44 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Small updates documentations. One or two phrase
 simplifications and took out some references to 1.1 release

---
 docs/source/configuration.rst | 17 ++++++-----------
 docs/source/installation.rst  |  6 +++---
 docs/source/output.rst        |  9 ++++-----
 docs/source/start.rst         | 19 +++++++++----------
 docs/source/tex.rst           |  3 ++-
 5 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/source/configuration.rst b/docs/source/configuration.rst
index 5685d7876..841c33aa6 100644
--- a/docs/source/configuration.rst
+++ b/docs/source/configuration.rst
@@ -326,17 +326,12 @@ Using in-line configuration options
 ===================================
 
 The second way to configure MathJax is through `in-line configuration`, 
-which puts the configuration options within the web page itself.  This 
-process was changed in version 1.1 to make it compatible with HTML5.  
-Earlier versions of MathJax had in-line configuration included within the 
-content of the ``<script>`` tag that loads ``MathJax.js``, but HTML5 makes 
-it illegal to have content for a script with a ``src`` attribute.
-
-MathJax solves this problem by using separate ``<script>`` tags to
-perform the configuration for and loading of MathJax.  Because MathJax
-starts its configuration process as soon as it is loaded, the
-configuration script must come **before** the script tag that loads
-``MathJax.js`` itself.  You do this by including a ``<script>`` with
+which puts the configuration options within the web page itself. The use 
+of in-line configuration with MathJax requires two separate  ``<script>`` 
+tags: one for specifying the configuration settings and one for loading of 
+MathJax.  Because MathJax starts its configuration process as soon as it is 
+loaded, the configuration script must come **before** the script tag that 
+loads ``MathJax.js`` itself.  You do this by including a ``<script>`` with
 ``type="text/x-mathjax-config"`` whose content will be run when
 MathJax performs its configuration.  Generally, this script will
 include a :meth:`MathJax.Hub.Config()` call to perform MathJax
diff --git a/docs/source/installation.rst b/docs/source/installation.rst
index 04aedd11a..dbf0d46ee 100644
--- a/docs/source/installation.rst
+++ b/docs/source/installation.rst
@@ -96,20 +96,20 @@ to get a list of the available branches.  There are separate branches
 for the main releases, but with ``-latest`` appended.  These contain
 all the patches for that particular release.  You can check out one of
 the branches just as you would a tagged copy.  For example, the branch
-for the ``v1.1`` tagged release is ``v1.1-latest``.  To get this
+for the ``v2.0`` tagged release is ``v2.0-latest``.  To get this
 release, use
 
 .. code-block:: sh
 
     cd MathJax
-    git checkout v1.1-latest
+    git checkout v2.0-latest
 
 and to update it when changes occur, use
 
 .. code-block:: sh
 
     cd MathJax
-    git pull origin v1.1-latest
+    git pull origin v2.0-latest
 
 
 .. _getting-mathjax-svn:
diff --git a/docs/source/output.rst b/docs/source/output.rst
index 572b365c0..e9f0b74de 100644
--- a/docs/source/output.rst
+++ b/docs/source/output.rst
@@ -43,8 +43,7 @@ more math is processed.  MathJax version 2.0 includes a number of
 optimizations to improve the display performance in IE, and it is now
 more comparable to other browsers.  The HTML-CSS output uses web-based
 fonts so that users don't have to have math fonts installed on their
-computers; but this does introduce some printing issues in some
-browsers.
+computers, which introduces some printing issues in certain browsers.
 
 The **SVG output processor** is new in MathJax version 2.0, and it uses
 `Scalable Vector Graphics` to render the mathematics on the page.  SVG
@@ -73,12 +72,12 @@ don't recommend using the NativeMML output processor with Opera.
 Safari has some support for MathML since version 5.1, but the quality
 is not as high as either Firefox's implementation or IE with MathPlayer.
 Chrome, Konqueror, and most other browsers don't support MathML
-natively, but may in the future, since MathML is part of the HTML5
-specification.
+natively, but this may change in the future, since MathML is part of 
+the HTML5 specification.
 
 The advantage of the NativeMML output Processor is its speed, since
 native MathML support is much faster than using complicated HTML and
-CSS to lay out mathematics, as the HTML-CSS output processor does.
+CSS to typeset mathematics, as the HTML-CSS output processor does.
 The disadvantage is that you are dependent on the browser's MathML
 implementation for your rendering, and these vary in quality of output
 and completeness of implementation.  MathJax relies on features that
diff --git a/docs/source/start.rst b/docs/source/start.rst
index c484bbc42..09f6e0632 100644
--- a/docs/source/start.rst
+++ b/docs/source/start.rst
@@ -5,13 +5,14 @@ Getting Started
 ***************
 
 MathJax allows you to include mathematics in your web pages, either
-using TeX and LaTeX notation, MathML, or AsciiMath notation, and you
-can even use all three in the same document.
+using LaTeX, MathML, or AsciiMath notation, and the mathematics
+will be processed using javascript to produce HTML, SVG or MathML 
+equations for viewing in any modern browser.
 
 There are two ways to access MathJax: the easiest way is to use the
 copy of MathJax available from our distributed network service at
 ``cdn.mathjax.org``, but you can also download and install a copy of
-MathJax on your own server, or use it locally on your own hard disk
+MathJax on your own server, or use it locally on your hard disk
 (with no need for network access).  All three of these are described
 below, with links to more detailed explanations.  This page gives the
 quickest and easiest ways to get MathJax up and running on your web
@@ -105,14 +106,12 @@ hard disk.
 Obtaining and Installing MathJax
 --------------------------------
 
-The easiest way to set up MathJax is to obtain the v1.1 archive from
+The easiest way to set up MathJax is to obtain the v2.0 archive from
 the `MathJax download page <http://www.mathjax.org/download/>`_ (you
-should obtain a file named something like
-``mathjax-MathJax-v1.1-X-XXXXXXXX.zip``, where the X's are
-random-looking letters and numbers).  This archive includes both the
-MathJax code and the MathJax webfonts, so it is the only file you
-need.  Note that this is different from v1.0 and earlier releases,
-which had the fonts separate from the rest of the code.
+should obtain a file named something like ``mathjax-MathJax-v2.0?.zip``).  
+This archive includes both the MathJax code and the MathJax webfonts, 
+so it is the only file you need.  Note that this is different from v1.0 
+and earlier releases, which had the fonts separate from the rest of the code.
 
 Unpack the archive and place the resulting MathJax folder onto your
 web server at a convenient location where you can include it into your
diff --git a/docs/source/tex.rst b/docs/source/tex.rst
index 4d5728ea3..eab972c3c 100644
--- a/docs/source/tex.rst
+++ b/docs/source/tex.rst
@@ -281,7 +281,8 @@ Autmatic Equation Numering
 ==========================
 
 New in MathJax v2.0 is the ability to have equations be numbered
-automatically.  This is off by default, so that pages don't change
+automatically.  This functionality is turned off by default, so 
+that pages don't change
 when you update from v1.1 to v2.0, but it is easy to configure MathJax
 to produce automatic equation numbers by adding: